Utakata-Rokubi Jinchuuriki

Hey all !
This is my new character suggestion for one of my favourite Naruto Characters Utakata,Rokubi Jinchuuriki.

Name:Utakata
Alias:Rokubi Jinchuuriki
Role:Ganker
Sub-Role:Semi-carry
Quote:"My hatred had shut my ears off… But I did hear…"
Damage:47-52
Attack Speed:Fast
Movement Speed:305
Attack Range:Ranged(Bubble Blower)
Range:500
Stats:
Strenght:18+1.6
Agility:23+2.6
Intelligence:17+1.8

Spells:

1st Spell.Bubble Clone Technique

Using his exploding bubble technique and bubble clone technique,Utakata creates a bubble clone from exploding bubbles.When the clone is destroyed or activated to be destroyed he explodes dealing damage in that area.
Damage:80/140/180/210
Cooldown:19/17/15/13
Mana Cost:90/100/110/120
AoE:250

2nd Spell:Floating Bubble Technique

Utakata can put himself in a bubble and he can ''fly'' through units and trees for 2/3/4/5 seconds.When the bubble pops,Utakata has increased movement speed for 3/5/7/10% for the next 2/3/4/5 seconds.
Duration:2/3/4/5 seconds.
Target:Self
Mana Cost:65 at all levels.
Cooldown:30/27/24/21 seconds.
Full Text:Utakata creates a single, particularly large bubble with his bubble-blower and quickly jumps inside. Under his command, the bubble will take him wherever he wishes.
Note.Ignores trees and units but does NOT ignore cliffs walls etc.

3rd Spell:Soap Bubble Slime

Utakata can make bubble slime.Opponents who step on it can't move for 2/2/3/4 seconds.
Duration:2/2/3/4 seconds.
Mana Cost:120/105/95/90
Cooldown:19/17/15/13
Cast Range:600
AoE:300
Target:Enemy Units

4th Spell:Ink Bubble Explosion

Utakata sends out a special bubble and traps the enemy within it.It filles with black liquid and then it pops dealing high amount of damage and slowing target.
Target:Enemy Units
Mana Cost:140/150/160
Cooldown:100/90/80
Cast Range:Melee(150)
Damage:80/120/150 per second.
Slow:10% for 3 seconds.
Full Text:Using his bubble-blower, Utakata sends out a special bubble toward the enemy which lasts for 3 seconds dealing damage and slowing the enemy, who is subsequently encased in a large bubble, which then appears to fill itself up with a black liquid. The bubbles then pop in a black inky splash, killing the enemy and leaving no sign of a corpse behind.

That's my suggestion for Utakata.
P.S.Game lacks ranged carries so this is what i came up with since they're my favourite type of heroes

They already have builds made for ALL of the Jinchuuriki. So...yeah.

Eol, Myself, and Musk made em, I think.

Cut Chemist wrote:

They already have builds made for ALL of the Jinchuuriki. So...yeah.

Eol, Myself, and Musk made em, I think.

Utakata has only 1 topic from dbr kovak , i don't like it that's why i made this...

Cut Chemist wrote:

They already have builds made for ALL of the Jinchuuriki. So...yeah.

Eol, Myself, and Musk made em, I think.

At least he is improving and the build doesn't look bad.



The only real bad thing is the ultimate, he is range, he is a carry, why should he deal 600 AoE damage along with a 25% slow? Thats to overpowered.

Phoenix- wrote:

Cut Chemist wrote:

They already have builds made for ALL of the Jinchuuriki. So...yeah.

Eol, Myself, and Musk made em, I think.

At least he is improving and the build doesn't look bad.



The only real bad thing is the ultimate, he is range, he is a carry, why should he deal 600 AoE damage along with a 25% slow? Thats to overpowered.

Shadowfiend says "Hi."

And the point was it would most likely be a waste of time to suggest the builds of the Jinchuuriki heroes.

Phoenix- wrote:

Cut Chemist wrote:

They already have builds made for ALL of the Jinchuuriki. So...yeah.

Eol, Myself, and Musk made em, I think.

At least he is improving and the build doesn't look bad.



The only real bad thing is the ultimate, he is range, he is a carry, why should he deal 600 AoE damage along with a 25% slow? Thats to overpowered.

No no no..it's cast range. not aoe.It's from what distance you can cast that spell

Quote :

No no no..it's cast range. not aoe.It's from what distance you can cast that spell Smile

Should be selfcast range because he is a carry hero and usually carriers need to be close to the unit to beat it.

Also you add a hold spell in your build and to make the sinergy complete you can hold the unit , run until you are close (with the second skill) enought and BaM! ultimate.

Eol wrote:

Quote :

No no no..it's cast range. not aoe.It's from what distance you can cast that spell Smile

Should be selfcast range because he is a carry hero and usually carriers need to be close to the unit to beat it.

Also you add a hold spell in your build and to make the sinergy complete you can hold the unit , run until you are close (with the second skill) enought and BaM! ultimate.

Eol is right , you need to change the ultimate in order to get a nice sinergy table.

So far your best suggestion, i give you 3.5/5

Eol wrote:

Quote :

No no no..it's cast range. not aoe.It's from what distance you can cast that spell Smile

Should be selfcast range because he is a carry hero and usually carriers need to be close to the unit to beat it.

Also you add a hold spell in your build and to make the sinergy complete you can hold the unit , run until you are close (with the second skill) enought and BaM! ultimate.

So just to reduce cast range ? kk

InMemory]Cobain wrote:

Eol wrote:

Quote :

No no no..it's cast range. not aoe.It's from what distance you can cast that spell Smile

Should be selfcast range because he is a carry hero and usually carriers need to be close to the unit to beat it.

Also you add a hold spell in your build and to make the sinergy complete you can hold the unit , run until you are close (with the second skill) enought and BaM! ultimate.

Eol is right , you need to change the ultimate in order to get a nice sinergy table.

So far your best suggestion, i give you 3.5/5

Lol ty
well if i won't make good sugg on my favourite hero.....I don't know what kind of suggestion i could make then lol

Skill 1: Not really a fan of clone skills, in general. The explosion deals way too much damage, and the clone is a little too strong for a non-ultimate. Doesn't fit well with the build as well. Skills 2 & 3 made him a solid ganker, the clone doesn't.

2nd Spell: Get rid of the flying, it is not balanced. Make it so he can pass through units and trees while in the bubble.

Skill 3: Scale the time they are unable to move, better.

4th skill: Burst damage, nah. Make it damage over time, only over a short period of time. Say... 2- 3 seconds or something like that.


Skills 2 - 4 are okay, 1 has no place in the build, unless they change it greatly.

Cut Chemist wrote:

Skill 1: Not really a fan of clone skills, in general. The explosion deals way too much damage, and the clone is a little too strong for a non-ultimate. Doesn't fit well with the build as well. Skills 2 & 3 made him a solid ganker, the clone doesn't.

2nd Spell: Get rid of the flying, it is not balanced. Make it so he can pass through units and trees while in the bubble.

Skill 3: Scale the time they are unable to move, better.

4th skill: Burst damage, nah. Make it damage over time, only over a short period of time. Say... 2- 3 seconds or something like that.


Skills 2 - 4 are okay, 1 has no place in the build, unless they change it greatly.

Skill 3 i did that yesterday..2/2/3/4 4th ok 2nd ok 1st. well he takes 450% dmg ...1st. Spell Changed.

I like it,overall,the changed 1st skill is alright.

He deals the majority of his damage through melee attacks, yet you give him a ganking skill set. Makes no sense... also, blindness too strong.

Cut Chemist wrote:

He deals the majority of his damage through melee attacks, yet you give him a ganking skill set. Makes no sense... also, blindness too strong.

He's ranged,well it doesn't have to be used for gank.He holds blinds and attacks and ulty you you start to run he goes in bubble when bubble pops he's faster etc......okay ill reduce blind....

I am aware he is ranged... but he has 1 nuke that does damage, and that is the ultimate. He has 0 skills that allow him to carry later on. So...really think about what you want him to do.

Cut Chemist wrote:

I am aware he is ranged... but he has 1 nuke that does damage, and that is the ultimate. He has 0 skills that allow him to carry later on. So...really think about what you want him to do.

Yes, you're right.With these spells,he's ganker not carry. that's his main role and sub-role could be semi-carry

P.S. about 1st spell when u said that no synergy,but hold him send clone and ulty and attack.. .