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PostSubject: Onoki   Onoki EmptyMon Jul 11, 2011 7:27 pm

My suggestion to Onoki,the Sandaime Tsuchikage
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Name:Onoki
Alias:Sandaime Tsuchikage
Role:Nuker
Sub-role:Support
Quote:"I'm here to pick up the principles I tossed so long ago!"
Attack Speed:Slow
Movement Speed:300
Range:Melee
Stats
Strenght : 18 + 1.8
Agility : 17 + 1.6
Intelligence : 24 + 2.3

Spells:

1st.Flame Boulder
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Onoki makes a rock boulder and puts it on fire,then he throws it at the opponents.
AoE:400(in front of onoki)
Damage:90/140/200/280
Mana Cost:90/100/110/120
Cooldown:16/13/11/9

2nd.Rock Avalanche
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Spell Type:Passive
Every time when Onoki casts a spell he makes rock avalanche that hits units in front of him for 70/80/90/100 damage.

3rd.Earth Cage
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Onoki traps opponent in a cage and after 1 second cage explodes dealing damage and slowing the opponent.
Traps:1 second
Damage:70/110/160/240
Slow:25% for 2 seconds.
Mana Cost:95/105/115/120

4th.Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu
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Onoki traps his opponent in Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu.He holds him in cube for 3 seconds and deals 90/130/170 per second.
Hold:3 seconds
Damage:90/130/170 per second.
Cooldown:160/130/100 secs.
Mana Cost:160/190/210
Chanelling:3 seconds

That's my idea for Onoki,The Sandaime Tsuchikage.


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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 1:41 am

A 6 second hold is ridiculous, especially when you can have it by level 6 with both skills still lvl 1. Change them so that they have the same damage on all levels but the duration of the hold increases each level or something like that
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 9:12 am

okay , then Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 9:20 am

i only found one thing funny : rock armor gives MS Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 9:38 am

3rd spell changed.Now it holds for 1/2/3/4 secs and it doesn't deal damage at all.It's like having stun for 4 secs on last level. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 6:56 pm

No synergy here...along with the out of place 2nd skill.

Two holds? Does he really need two of them?
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:24 pm

Well ulty is channeling so i don't think it's too imba.

And btw. Yes he does need 2 holds because 3rd spell is only a technique that's shown (along with Particle Style:The Box Of Dissapearing)
I don't think 3rd spell is too imba because it doesn't deal damage.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:28 pm

Jiraiya wrote:
Well ulty is channeling so i don't think it's too imba.

And btw. Yes he does need 2 holds because 3rd spell is only a technique that's shown (along with Particle Style:The Box Of Dissapearing)
I don't think 3rd spell is too imba because it doesn't deal damage.

It means he can make a 5 v 5 fight, 3 v 5 with his team focusing on the two disabled units.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:41 pm

Yes but channeling ulty can be stopped.But if you really think it's too imba .. I'll change it.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:46 pm

Jiraiya wrote:
Yes but channeling ulty can be stopped.But if you really think it's too imba .. I'll change it.

It can be stopped, correct. The point is...two holds is completely too strong.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:53 pm

Changed Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:54 pm

Jiraiya wrote:
Changed Smile

Other problems...not fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:56 pm

How no sinergy ? Trap you in cage for 1 sec do flame boulder and ulty. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 7:58 pm

Jiraiya wrote:
How no sinergy ? Trap you in cage for 1 sec do flame boulder and ulty. Very Happy

#1. Boulder... is really uninspired...and you could do so much more with the skill.
#2. The 2nd skill in no way helps his skill set.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 8:04 pm

Cut Chemist wrote:
Jiraiya wrote:
How no sinergy ? Trap you in cage for 1 sec do flame boulder and ulty. Very Happy

#1. Boulder... is really uninspired...and you could do so much more with the skill.
#2. The 2nd skill in no way helps his skill set.

If every spell deals damage then he would be too imba.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyTue Jul 12, 2011 8:07 pm

Jiraiya wrote:
Cut Chemist wrote:
Jiraiya wrote:
How no sinergy ? Trap you in cage for 1 sec do flame boulder and ulty. Very Happy

#1. Boulder... is really uninspired...and you could do so much more with the skill.
#2. The 2nd skill in no way helps his skill set.

If every spell deals damage then he would be too imba.

... Use your brain.

Must every spell deal damage? No.
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PostSubject: Re: Onoki   Onoki EmptyThu Jul 14, 2011 10:49 am

Changed. Smile
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